Big Picture Revisions and Small Revisions

Rank: Masters Objective

For this piece, I got to pick what I was writing about so I chose to write and non-fictional story of a Army Mission. I gave myself masters rank because I got a good grade on it and because I executed my skills well. I enjoyed writing this piece because it also taught me a little more about what military life was like.

Creative Writing Final Draft

Revised Draft

 

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